The Master Bedroom
The master bedroom of the mansion has a rectangular floor of 30 by 40 feet. It has four door to it. One door leads to the living room. The door marked with a gun leads to the weaponry room. The door marked with a flower leads to an elevator. And finally, the last door leads to a giant restroom. On the center of the master bedroom, there is a mattress big enough to fit 10 people sleeping together. It is made with the finest cloth, cotton, and foam to form a unique bed that gives a person a close to perfect sleep. Then near the southwest corner there is a grand piano. After that, there are two highly advanced computers in the northeast section of the room. Then there's a closet in the south east corner. The closet is big enough to put ten caskets in it. Finally, near the northwest corner, there are ten giant stuffed animals. The stuffed animals include an ox, a pig, a lion, a tiger, a bear, a moose, an elephant, a vulture, a whale, and a gorilla. All of the giant stuffed animals are big enough to fit a fully grown person in it.
Thursday, April 23, 2009
Write as if you're a grandma
I go to church every Sunday. At church, we always talk about Mr. Higgins. He's a dirty snake. He comes around the children every time. Why did they not arrest him for life when they had the chance? Now, it's too late.
Them cops should have killed him. Remember last year when he tried to kidnap one of our children. It was very difficult to get that child back. He was lucky that his brother was the mayor. I should have moved when I was younger. But now, I'm too old. I can't believe I'm left with the burden of these grand children.
Every night, we locked up our doors and windows. Now that monster comes every night to get our children. What's wrong with that man. If my son and his wife was still alive, we would have moved. This is terrible.
When will we capture this criminal who wants children? Who will take the task of hunting down this man? It will only be a matter of time before one of our children is kidnap again. I will be very grateful to whomever saves us from this corrupted man.
I can't sleep well at night. I have to stay up most of the time to keep a lookout for Mr. Higgins. The most dangerous time is the night time. Why does Mr. Higgins want the children anyway?
Them cops should have killed him. Remember last year when he tried to kidnap one of our children. It was very difficult to get that child back. He was lucky that his brother was the mayor. I should have moved when I was younger. But now, I'm too old. I can't believe I'm left with the burden of these grand children.
Every night, we locked up our doors and windows. Now that monster comes every night to get our children. What's wrong with that man. If my son and his wife was still alive, we would have moved. This is terrible.
When will we capture this criminal who wants children? Who will take the task of hunting down this man? It will only be a matter of time before one of our children is kidnap again. I will be very grateful to whomever saves us from this corrupted man.
I can't sleep well at night. I have to stay up most of the time to keep a lookout for Mr. Higgins. The most dangerous time is the night time. Why does Mr. Higgins want the children anyway?
Point of View
Michael was just a boy when he entered the "Oily War". He was a soldier patrolling the city of Gebra. He was in the war because he wanted to help his country by winning the war and bringing oil to his home. He patrolled the city Gebra with his brother Jack. One day Michael and Jack spotted some suspicious men on the corner of a block buidling. Michaeld told them to stop and they kept walking. Then they pulled out their assault rifle and told them to stop. The men dodged behind the corner and the brothers followed behind.
"Alright you go this other way and we will intercept them. If they attack you, fire back!" Michael said to Jack. As Michael approached the corner, he heard assault rifle being fired. He knew immediately what he must do. He must kill the men. He turned around the corner and returned fire. The fire continued on for a while. Then Michael hit a man. The firing stop. He turned to look and there was his brohter dead on the ground. He had realized that he had shot his brother by mistake. Michael went over to retreat the corpse and brought to his base. He wanted to go home but he couldn't because he has to serve in the war for one year.
After one year, Michael returned home. He went to his brother's grave and kneel down. It was his fault. He wasn't careful.
"Why, Why, Why?" was what Michael said. He cried. There was nothig Michael could do. His brother had died long ago. Was the war worth it? Is this truly what happens in a war, where anything can go and happen? Michael felt very remorseful and don't know how he will go on living. What a horrible thing war is.
"Alright you go this other way and we will intercept them. If they attack you, fire back!" Michael said to Jack. As Michael approached the corner, he heard assault rifle being fired. He knew immediately what he must do. He must kill the men. He turned around the corner and returned fire. The fire continued on for a while. Then Michael hit a man. The firing stop. He turned to look and there was his brohter dead on the ground. He had realized that he had shot his brother by mistake. Michael went over to retreat the corpse and brought to his base. He wanted to go home but he couldn't because he has to serve in the war for one year.
After one year, Michael returned home. He went to his brother's grave and kneel down. It was his fault. He wasn't careful.
"Why, Why, Why?" was what Michael said. He cried. There was nothig Michael could do. His brother had died long ago. Was the war worth it? Is this truly what happens in a war, where anything can go and happen? Michael felt very remorseful and don't know how he will go on living. What a horrible thing war is.
Character Description
Ching was a 5 foot skinny seventeen year old male teen. He may look skinny but he's a very violent person. His knuckles were iron solid hard cold and he could punch out a man's tooth leaving behind a stunning effect. Last week, he got into a fight with Joey Phenomenon. Joey wanted to bully him because he looked like a peaceful and weak teen. But boy was Joey wrong!
First, Joey approached him and asked him for one dollar. Ching responded by saying that he didn't have any money. Then Joey started pushin him around. Ching told him to stop but he kept pushing Ching.
"If you give me one dollar, I will stop" said Joey.
"I'm serious. If you don't stop, I will hurt you" said Ching.
"Okay, alright, you little SHRIMP" said Joey. Then he turned around and started walking away. As Joey was walking away, Ching threw a puch to Joey's back head. Joey fell on the floor and was temporarily blind. Ching picked him pu and looked at Joey's dizzy face. Then Ching punched him many times in the ribs until he was coughing up blood. Then Ching knee him five times on the chin. Finally, Ching gave him a tremendous punch on the chin. Joey lay flat on the ground near death. Everyone was shocked at Ching's brutality. The bell rang and everbody went to class with the fight as the number one topic on the mind. The next day, the school confirmed that Joey has four broken ribs and a shattered chin. Everyone was scarred of Ching and called him Ching, the Chin Cracker and no one wanted to mess with him.
First, Joey approached him and asked him for one dollar. Ching responded by saying that he didn't have any money. Then Joey started pushin him around. Ching told him to stop but he kept pushing Ching.
"If you give me one dollar, I will stop" said Joey.
"I'm serious. If you don't stop, I will hurt you" said Ching.
"Okay, alright, you little SHRIMP" said Joey. Then he turned around and started walking away. As Joey was walking away, Ching threw a puch to Joey's back head. Joey fell on the floor and was temporarily blind. Ching picked him pu and looked at Joey's dizzy face. Then Ching punched him many times in the ribs until he was coughing up blood. Then Ching knee him five times on the chin. Finally, Ching gave him a tremendous punch on the chin. Joey lay flat on the ground near death. Everyone was shocked at Ching's brutality. The bell rang and everbody went to class with the fight as the number one topic on the mind. The next day, the school confirmed that Joey has four broken ribs and a shattered chin. Everyone was scarred of Ching and called him Ching, the Chin Cracker and no one wanted to mess with him.
Science Fiction Writing
My new home is now located in the south western region of the United States. I can't believed this happened. Why did it have to happened? We were just living normally. My father worked and paid for our meals, insurances, and home. Then all of a sudden, the planet started to heat up. It became warm, very very warm. Heat filled everywhere and you were always sweating. Next, it became impossible to live in California. The news reported that the intense heating was the result of global warming.
"We cannot live in here anymore" my father said. So he took us out of the state and moved to a less polluted area. The new area still have some ozone layer left and it protected the area from intense heat. In the new area, my parents worked together with other parents at a farm area. They supplied most of the food to the area.
Our journey from California to the new area taught us how important the environment was to everyone. Without a suitable environment, life would not be possible. Hopefully, this catastrophe will end someday. Was global warming a human cause or just a natural process on the earth? I hope that someday I can go back to what used to be my home.
"We cannot live in here anymore" my father said. So he took us out of the state and moved to a less polluted area. The new area still have some ozone layer left and it protected the area from intense heat. In the new area, my parents worked together with other parents at a farm area. They supplied most of the food to the area.
Our journey from California to the new area taught us how important the environment was to everyone. Without a suitable environment, life would not be possible. Hopefully, this catastrophe will end someday. Was global warming a human cause or just a natural process on the earth? I hope that someday I can go back to what used to be my home.
Setting Landscape
There was this children playground near our school. We went there on April 23, 2009. That day was windy. The wind blew fiercely and sometimes not at all. It blew from all directions. It carries the scent of the air with it. When we were walking to the playground, it carried the scent of a garbage truck to us. That smell reeks. The disgusting scent showed me how the wind connects everybody together. It connects everything on earth by bringing the scent of everything together.
Besides there being winds at the park, there wasn't very much noises either. It was wonderful. Less noises bring a calm and relaxing atmosphere. This calm atmosphere was an excellent place to get away from school. It allows you to wander around and forget about the assignments back in school.
Not only did this place has a calm atmosphere, but it was also a boring place. The playground's sight was very boring. It was a boring place because I live in the cities and I saw this sight everyday. It was not unique and just plain ordinary. By ordinary, I mean that sands, cement floors, cars, and benches were present. How Ordinary! The sight may have been boring but the time spent out of school was worth the trouble.
Besides there being winds at the park, there wasn't very much noises either. It was wonderful. Less noises bring a calm and relaxing atmosphere. This calm atmosphere was an excellent place to get away from school. It allows you to wander around and forget about the assignments back in school.
Not only did this place has a calm atmosphere, but it was also a boring place. The playground's sight was very boring. It was a boring place because I live in the cities and I saw this sight everyday. It was not unique and just plain ordinary. By ordinary, I mean that sands, cement floors, cars, and benches were present. How Ordinary! The sight may have been boring but the time spent out of school was worth the trouble.
Monday, April 20, 2009
Response to A Rose for Emily
1. Plot: Conflicts
The conflict is Emily versus society.
2. Setting: sense of setting
I have a strong sense of the time and place.
3. Character: interest
Emily engages my interest because she's a lonely person.
4. Symbolism
I think the symbolic elements are adequately integrated within the story.
5. Theme
The theme is that some people never change. This theme challenge the values that i hold to a weak degree. People changed when they're brain washed. Otherwise than being brain washed, some people never change.
The conflict is Emily versus society.
2. Setting: sense of setting
I have a strong sense of the time and place.
3. Character: interest
Emily engages my interest because she's a lonely person.
4. Symbolism
I think the symbolic elements are adequately integrated within the story.
5. Theme
The theme is that some people never change. This theme challenge the values that i hold to a weak degree. People changed when they're brain washed. Otherwise than being brain washed, some people never change.
Reading Response to Hills Like White Elephants
1. Plot
The story's conflict is the couple deciding whether or not to have an abortion.
2. Setting: sense of setting
I have a strong sense of the time and place. They're at a train station and it's somewhere in the 1900s.
3. Setting: Relation with plot and characters
The setting relates to the plot and characters. They are at a train stations. They have to decide which path they are going to take. Their choice of the path is like deciding whether or not to have an abortion. The train station is like a destination decision. Once you made up your decision and you ride the train, there's no going back.
4. Character: Interests
The man in the story engages my interest because he's always talking.
5. Theme
The theme is that a choice has to be made between life and death. The theme of this story reinforces the values that I hold.
The story's conflict is the couple deciding whether or not to have an abortion.
2. Setting: sense of setting
I have a strong sense of the time and place. They're at a train station and it's somewhere in the 1900s.
3. Setting: Relation with plot and characters
The setting relates to the plot and characters. They are at a train stations. They have to decide which path they are going to take. Their choice of the path is like deciding whether or not to have an abortion. The train station is like a destination decision. Once you made up your decision and you ride the train, there's no going back.
4. Character: Interests
The man in the story engages my interest because he's always talking.
5. Theme
The theme is that a choice has to be made between life and death. The theme of this story reinforces the values that I hold.
The Story of An Hour Responses
1. Setting: Sense of Setting
I have a strong sense of the setting.
2. Plot: conflict
There conflict in the story is the woman deciding her future life. She has to think and plan out her future because her husband is dead.
3. Character: Interest Character?
The character that interest me is Mrs. Mallard. She interest me because she died of joy at the end.
4. Character: How author reveal character?
The author reveal Mrs. Mallard's character by her thoughts about the future, her actions, and her speech.
5. Theme
The theme is that people's life can change in an instant. This theme enforces values that I hold such as being a righteous person and an evil person.
I have a strong sense of the setting.
2. Plot: conflict
There conflict in the story is the woman deciding her future life. She has to think and plan out her future because her husband is dead.
3. Character: Interest Character?
The character that interest me is Mrs. Mallard. She interest me because she died of joy at the end.
4. Character: How author reveal character?
The author reveal Mrs. Mallard's character by her thoughts about the future, her actions, and her speech.
5. Theme
The theme is that people's life can change in an instant. This theme enforces values that I hold such as being a righteous person and an evil person.
Response to three questions for "The story of an hour"
1. Five important phrases to me are she wept at once, she was young; "free, free, free!", she would live to herself, and the joy that kills.
2. I chose "she wept at once" because the line shows how close Mrs. Mallard is to her husband. I chose "she was young" because it portrays a tragedy to a young woman, and that event is very rare. I chose the line "free, free, free!" because it is about freedom, a theme that i liked. Then i chose "she would live for herself" because that line illustrates her future for herself. Lastly, I chose the line "the joy that kills" because the line portrayed that joy can kill people, which is unexpected for me.
3. My question I have for the story is why did Mrs. Mallard died of joy.
2. I chose "she wept at once" because the line shows how close Mrs. Mallard is to her husband. I chose "she was young" because it portrays a tragedy to a young woman, and that event is very rare. I chose the line "free, free, free!" because it is about freedom, a theme that i liked. Then i chose "she would live for herself" because that line illustrates her future for herself. Lastly, I chose the line "the joy that kills" because the line portrayed that joy can kill people, which is unexpected for me.
3. My question I have for the story is why did Mrs. Mallard died of joy.
Response to Yellow Paper
1. Plot
There is the conflict between the narrator and freedom. She was confined to a room and she could not go outside.
2. Setting
The setting is at a summer house in a village. The setting is the inside of a summer house. It's inside a confined room.
3. Relation between setting and character?
The summer house is the rest place for the narrator. It's also confined to keep the narrator safe from harm.
4. Symbolism
The confined room symbolizes protection. The husband wanted to protect his wife so he locked her inside the room. Also, he tends to the wife periodically to show that he has not forgotten about her.
5. Restate theme
The theme is that men thinks woman are weak. The narrator said that she feels better and her husband insist that she rest up. Her husband never accepted her words that she feels better.
There is the conflict between the narrator and freedom. She was confined to a room and she could not go outside.
2. Setting
The setting is at a summer house in a village. The setting is the inside of a summer house. It's inside a confined room.
3. Relation between setting and character?
The summer house is the rest place for the narrator. It's also confined to keep the narrator safe from harm.
4. Symbolism
The confined room symbolizes protection. The husband wanted to protect his wife so he locked her inside the room. Also, he tends to the wife periodically to show that he has not forgotten about her.
5. Restate theme
The theme is that men thinks woman are weak. The narrator said that she feels better and her husband insist that she rest up. Her husband never accepted her words that she feels better.
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